YOU’RE dark tonight
Feb10
on February 10, 2020
at 10:03 pm
Chapter: In Search of Irving
Characters: Charlie Buonaugura, Finn MacArthur
Location: Finn & Charlie's home, Finn & Charlie's Kitchen
Look, another comic. See! I have not abandoned you. I was just spending some time ironing out the kinks in this story, and also playing games on my phone.
Finn looks so cheerful as he tells Charlie to look both ways before crossing the street. LOL For some reason, Charlie’s “Cremate me” made me laugh. I think it was Finn’s reaction–as if he’s surprised the previous conversation inspired this train of thought in his husband.
What was Charlie saying, “I know…” to? It seems like a dialogue bubble is missing – or I’m going crazy?
Maybe it’s supposed to be, “But I know eventually . . . “
Ugh, good catch. Thank you. I messed up the word bubbles. “I can’t imagine going through that” is supposed to be a separate line that Finn says. I will fix that when I get a chance.